Open Poetry #6 |
A Roses Reflection of Love |
Jason Danes New Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 5 |
A Roses Reflection of Love By: Jason Danes Love is like a rose Growing day by day Sometimes it buds and flowers And sometimes just wilts away At first it seems so beautiful Its' colors gleem so bright Taking in all the attention The sun gives it with it's light But when the seasons change The rose begins to morn Then it drops its' flower And shows its' spiney thorn If it's not kept properly And covered from the frost Then the rose is soon to die And will be forever lost Sometimes the best poems come from the heart! [This message has been edited by Jason Danes (edited 02-09-2000).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well spoken Jason... wise words concerning love and roses. May your heart never be bitten by the frost of winter... and welcome to our poetic halls. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Welcome to Passions Jason. A very beautiful analogy love and the rose. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
nice poem....thanks for the read.... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Excellent flow! Great thoughts! Love it! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
So beautiful Jason! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a nice poem Jason..just in time for Valentine's Day. |
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