Issey the Rabbit(story for my daughter)

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jbowie
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since 2000-02-18

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BANGOR (that OR) ME

0 posted 2000-02-24 11:45 PM

I know this may no be the right forum, but please help me out, I am trying to write a story for my daughter-add in please or correct whatever

Issey the Rabbit always liked a warm spring day
she loved blustery march and the coming of may
when it was cold she knew winter would pass
and soon she would play in warm sun and green grass

Clover beds as soft as fluffy goose down
the sun dons clouds like a kings golden crown
Issey ate her fill from the fresh buds of spring
always on the lookout for some unknown new thing

During her day she may see a ladybug fly
or blackbirds flying above in the sky
Issey always explored beyond what was known
wanted to go even further when she was all grown

But no matter how far in the day she did roam
when the time came she always hurried home
When she came home her mother always asked
"Where did you go on your wandering task?"

"I saw birds flying in a twirling play"
"and a ladybug crawling in the warmth of the day"
"It sounds so lovely" her mother said with care
"Now go wash up while your dinner I prepare"

After dinner with her stomach full and tight
Issey began to get ready to sleep for the night
She washed her face and brushed her teeth
and jumped in her bed feeling warm underneath

As she laid cozy in her warm little bed
her Mama and Papa came and kissed her on the head
"I love you" said Mama and Papa said it too
And Isabelle drifted to sleep knowing it was true

A real man
kisses his children goodnight

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 2000-02-25 01:39 AM

Nothing to be added or corrected. Well done.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2000-02-25 10:01 AM

I'm all smiles... this is wonderful!

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2000-02-25 10:20 AM

This is beautiful and such a wonderful gift from the heart to your daughter.

Don't change a word ! It's perfect as it is !

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

4 posted 2000-02-25 01:02 PM

Well everyone knows that I'm really a child and I LOVE it..

HUGS

Ouvrir mon coeur et âme

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2008-01-01 11:19 AM

JBowie~

This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL~

' A real man
kisses his children goodnight'

Indeed they do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

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