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Open Poetry #6

Ostroniwint

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-24 05:42 PM

As she asked me please
I fell to my knees
A forgotten man

I have traveled the seas
Of false securities
Reaching out my hand

To break these chains
That have still remained
They always do

But here comes the pain
With the falling rain
It’s nothing new

Now, there’s a new wind blowing
The haze is clearing
A new revelation

Like a fire showing
The flames I’m fearing,
That old temptation

And for a moment all is still
Except for my wavering will
An absence of sound

I dare not leave until,
Of her, I get my fill
And sink softly to the ground

Waiting for the sun to rise
And shed light on my tired eyes
To begin once again

The journey I so despise
Her name whispers around me
As it flies,

Upon the Eastern wind

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

1 posted 2000-02-24 05:50 PM

Very much to my liking, JML!

Corinne

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2000-02-24 05:57 PM

Thanks Corinne.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-24 06:15 PM

you were expecting me right?

LOL
well... now your just showing off(smile)
this is excellent and the very difficult rhyme pattern was not lost on me...
poerty in motion! perfection!
stalk ya later, janet

...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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