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I Think I am in Love
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I Think I am in Love |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I’m haunted by her Whispered words, Her hair, her face She’s a shadow from The darkness, A lady born of mystery With a look and Twist of her slender wrist, I am mesmerized Within her soul Can’t you hear her now? She calls to us all Upon a barren ledge, Overlooking the endless sea I am not the only one Who has come this way And I know that, I am not the last To look upon Those colorless eyes, And into a heart that knows not The consequences of Emotional greed To satisfy the tell-tale Signs of humanity In decline I, in almost all certainty, Should have recognized All the warnings Before I stopped To listen to her song Now, finally, I think I am in love |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
I've read this one over and over... and can't say that I really get the "story". But having read it aloud, had to tell you how beautifully these words are coupled together. Simply vocally musical. I will continue to disect this one and get back to you. Intriguing, to say the least. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks January. I'd love your dissection. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
JML... "I"M BAAAAAACCCKKKK!!!! (do you feel like your being stalked)  ...Seriously though... I think Im in LOVE with this poem... its SO beautiful...sensual and mystic... "She’s a shadow from The darkness, A lady born of mystery With a look and Twist of her slender wrist, I am mesmerized Within her soul"... oh yes...Im in love...(smile) stalk ya later  janet marie...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Stalk me yes! I have arrived! LOL Thanks janet. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ yet another to amaze me and touch my heart.(I think I gotta bruise now!  LOL)-SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML~ Whimsically lovely. My desire would be that we've all heard her song at one time or another. You just sang it beautifully. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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