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Open Poetry #6

Hold me

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-02-24 11:04 AM

Hold me tight,
Don't want this night to end,
I want this night to remember,
Hold me,kiss me,touch me,love me,
Hold me close to you,
Love is so sweet,
Don't want this night to end,
Let's remember to the years,
we spent together,
Let's hold hands,
And hold on to the life we make together,
Let's take a deep breathe for awhile,
for the next step we take ,
so hold ,e
Tell me,
Tell me the thingd we used to say,
The night is young,
And we can mke very wish
upon very star,
Hold me tight,
Don't let me go,
Hold me tight,

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-24 10:50 PM

Beautiful love poem, Vandana!

Denise

January Flowers
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

2 posted 2000-02-25 10:08 PM

This would make a beautiful song!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-02-26 12:33 PM

VanDana~
Lovely, dear.
So full of longing and love.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-02-26 02:16 AM

This was very beautiful Vandana....Hold me, kiss me, touch me, love me this was sweet

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-02-26 06:48 AM

Reminds me of a Beatles tune!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-02-26 03:46 PM

Some very desirable and sweet moments. James

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

7 posted 2000-02-26 03:49 PM

Very nice Vandana... I liked your poem very much.

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