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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Sunshine On a Silver Plate |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
 Some Daffodils ventured out in January Amid the brown leaves of winter February, they were spread like Butter on hard cold toast Today a bird awoke me Then, when I ventured Out the door The Forsythia had Burst in bloom Shining forth Like Sunshine On A Silver Plate [This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 02-24-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Wow! What beautiful imagery! This is a very nice piece of work. I really liked the last line! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading. ~Amy~  ) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sigh...how lovely. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, Septsong, what a beautiful poem. You paint such a vivid picture with your imagery and unique style. It's hard to find the words to describe how captiviating this piece of art is. This is by far your best poem. Applause! Take care, Melissa Honeybee  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Don't know where you live , but we sure could use some of that here .Thanks for the up-lift Doc |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh how beautiful!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SeptSong~ I LIKE VERY MUCH ! Just love the presentation. Great graphic beginning !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
Thumbs up. Like the picture you pained...  ) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Serve up some more... this is delightful! |
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