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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Inner Peace |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Inner Peace You see me cautiously reserving my flowing tender love like a little child playing hide and seek around your heart. While thousands of raging storms of great and mighty magnitude slowly hover through your aching mind. I see them flooding your brilliant intellect and once treasured captivating reason beyond your inner reaching vision. Can I tenderly take your hand in mine and lovingly guide you to the serene safety of the inspirational land of my peaceful dreams? Where happily once we in unity with each other could dance on the fullest moon and know our completeness in the existing universal atmosphere of beautiful inner peace. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-24-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ The greatest peace we can bestow, is found within the inner glow. GREAT THOUGHTS here, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~could dance on the fullest moon and know our completeness in the existing universal atmosphere of beautiful inner peace~ this poem is devine...tracie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well, that's what you gave me while reading this...inner peace! Very beautiful!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, LD! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge: Thank You, I love that inner glow tracie66: Thank You, I liked that line too. WhtDove: Thank You, it's always refreshing to know someone can be moved by a poem. Suthern: Thank You |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Dreamer. " playing hide and seek around your heart"....wonderful phrase  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Gloria! This has a peaceful gentle quality. I love it! Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Could use a dos of that inner peace right now - that's for sure. Beautiful poem, Gloria. To fins that feeling alone is a milestone, to find that feeling with someone else would be a miracle. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gloria...where are you coming up with all this inspiration girl, you got yourself one heck of a muse these days  Wonderful work my friend |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very creativeand beautiful thought,to take someone to an inward place liz |
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