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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-08 02:07 PM


It is a feeling you cannot describe
No matter how hard you try
Words don’t come as easy as before
Though you want to say more
And the pain cuts away at your heart
Whenever you are apart
It is a feeling that grows
Through the highs and lows
Whether you’re together or far away
It grows every day
And everything in nature sings
Of beautiful things
While risking the pain
Of falling rain
Yet, another day comes along
With an even better song
But you can’t possibly hear,
Nothing matters to ears
That don’t care for anything except
The feeling you get
When you hear that soft sound
Turns you around
Because it’s from the voice;
The person of your choice
Whose vision controls every thought
And for whom you sought
Through years of loneliness
Now there’s happiness
And at last the meaning is clear
Wipe away the tears
Understand that life is a journey
Of insecurity
Unless you have someone
Together as one
Helping the journey and to understand
While walking hand in hand
Love breathes
Breath of life from afar
Love lasts
As eternal as you are
Love shines
Bright white burning star
Love is
Nothing less, and nothing more


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
bobbycat
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 233
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1 posted 2000-02-08 02:26 PM


I think you've hit the nail on the head exactly...great job.     

Bobbycat =^..^=

PoeticKnight
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New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2000-02-08 02:32 PM


Thanks Bobbycat.
HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
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3 posted 2000-02-08 02:34 PM


Well said and nicely done
May love be always your # 1
A hammer and a nail perhaps
Flowers and poerty get you further, any bets  
just kidding around bobbycat  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


SEA
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4 posted 2000-02-08 02:59 PM


JML, so very nice, this is great!   -SEA
Evad
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 12

5 posted 2000-02-08 03:27 PM


Extremely moving.  I really do like it.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
6 posted 2000-02-09 04:07 AM


Boy have you said it

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

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