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thebob
Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-02-23 11:07 PM


look into her eyes
you will see her wishes
you will see her desires
her eyes tell a story
a story like from a book
a Book of Life
it tells her dreams
descibes her wants
and lists her needs
she needs to be loved
she wants it to ber your love
you can see that
when you look into her eyes
look into her eyes
and you should see yourself


               her beautiful eyes contain a      
               reflection of myself

                             thebob

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-23 11:17 PM


This was wonderful!  I like this very much.  And WELCOME to Passions!< !signature-->

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There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins


[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-23-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-23 11:51 PM


well, T bob, its obvious your quite inspired tonite...and now ADMIRED!!  
another beauty...
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


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