Open Poetry #6 |
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Poppy Girl |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
Poppy red sun curling round your face; your colors will always sing to me. Your whites so white, your pinks so pink, and those eyes clear blue as mountain pools. East Indian oranges in exotic prints. Western Indian paintbrush blooming in the desert against a setting sun; golden tangerine glowing. Your fire burns ever, calling me from every sidewalk, whispering your name. In my memory, a brilliant blaze streaks across the magic of your silky slender curves, slanting like sunset along the meadow. Velvet remembrance of your skin still strokes my fingertips; while the warmth of your thighs cushion my longing hips. The campfire of your colors fan against my senses like a spring monsoon, while scents of coral wildflowers linger on your lips. [This message has been edited by kaleidoscope (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent..!!! and hard to do. Love the imagery in this one. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is absolutely breathtaking. Wonderful format - and echoing PdV on the imagery aspect. Give yourself a pat on the back for this! ![]() 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well, after hearing only a few of red haired lovers I thought to tell you... I only see the gold and this is a jewel set in gold. |
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