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Open Poetry #6

~slow dance~

jeremyc
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-02-23 07:40 PM

there's a slow song playing and we begin to dance
a feeling comes over me, a feeling of romance
your body's against mine and we sway side to side
there's no need for words, but nothing to hide
you press your forehead up against mine
i look in your eyes, look for a sign
i become dimly aware of my hands on your hips
but at the moment, all i see is your lips
suddenly the music fades out in the distance
if there are others around, i know not their existance
i lean in, and finally my lips meet yours
my mind is cleared, but my adrenaline soars
time passes, who knows how long
in your arms, i feel like i belong
like all good things, this kiss must end
but i'll never be the same person again
and you may not believe me, but i swear that it's true
no matter what happens, i'll always love you

Jeremy

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2000-02-23 07:52 PM

Ahhhh the magic of a kiss...very well expressed here Jeremy. Really touching poem. Keep it up.

)
Amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-02-23 07:55 PM

Sensual (or is it sensuous--Christpher?)
Applause forthcoming from the self-proclaimed
Queen of Hedonism!

jeremyc
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 18

3 posted 2000-02-23 09:48 PM

thank you aimster...it was definitely magic
and thank you serenit (i think

))

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