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As The Sun Rose
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As The Sun Rose |
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Evad Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 12 |
As the sun rose and the waves crashed ashore, My love for you grew stronger and so much more. The full moon still showed its face, Racing for the night to embrace. As the white caps travel up the sand, I only envision us hand in hand. We felt the cool morning breeze around all peaceful, I look into your eyes and said "You are Beautiful". Time will forever stand still for us, For soulmates and true loves it is a plus. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Evad, WELCOME!! This is really sweet. I enjoyed it! Will look for more from you!  -SEA |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Dave, umm, I mean Evad: This is beautiful and has me longing for summer shore days again. Welcome. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Welcome to passion with such passionate poem you came. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Welcome to passions, great poem! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Welcome, welcome, welcome. Hold on a sec, I need to get the sand out from between my toes....There all clean. Very nicely done. I like it. I hope there is more from where that came from. Oh did I mention, welcome to passions? Poet: An individual that can transfer what is in the heart onto paper. |
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dash rendor Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 21 |
Welcome to passions. Im new here to but i have not posted yet. Im glad ive waited. Now i see how skillfully i will have to write. Nice poem, i look foward to reading more of your work. |
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Evad Junior Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 12 |
January Flowers: You are soooo perspective! |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Perceptive, too. Except when it's precipitating. Then I'm pragmatic. Takes one to know one, Evad, I used to be backwards, too. Again, Welcome to Passions, with a "P". |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! Painted the ocean scene for me! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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