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One side of Love
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One side of Love |
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Xcaliber Junior Member
since 2000-02-22
Posts 12 |
To take and give nothing is a selfish thing to do, To love without sharing is to love only you, To listen without hearing is what makes you cold, To speaking without caring is what makes you bold, To open your heart for one is to close it on another, To give only half of you is to leave a love uncovered, To take more than you need leaving nothing but a shell, is to someday give me pleasure knowing that your soul will rest In Hell. |
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thebob Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 15 |
that was very good and very meaningful. i believe that there wasn't a lie in it. you spoke of life. you're very talented. bob |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Oh, what tangled webs we weave....thanx for this post. Dennis :^) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I don't think I was quite expecting an end like that. Hurt really flows from this. Very well done, says a lot <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Xcaliber~ I didn't expect the ending either, but wow! really packs a punch! So much feeling.............-SEA |
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Xcaliber Junior Member
since 2000-02-22
Posts 12 |
Thank you for the replies. And about the ending,it was one that I had not expected either. Just another one of life`s downfalls that we all seem to endure. |
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