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Fishing With a Brother
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Fishing With a Brother |
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Xcaliber Junior Member
since 2000-02-22
Posts 12 |
For many day`s I`ve read One poem after another, And even today it remind`s me Of fishing with my brother, You cast out your line so that your bobber will pop, With a smile you reel it in and bring it to the top, Sometimes it`s a angelfish and sometime`s it`s an eel, Sometime`s it`s so ugly Your not sure how to feel, For those that catch the eel I hope you`ll write another, And know that when you fish with me Your fishing with your brother. [This message has been edited by Xcaliber (edited 02-22-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is great..fun and imaginative..very creative. I enjoyed this. take care janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Xcaliber Junior Member
since 2000-02-22
Posts 12 |
Thank you Janet. I was just trying to show a happier side of my writing. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Liked this much-- "sometimes it's an angelfish, sometimes it's an eel..." I am never sure what it is I'm reeling in, until it's posted. But this--angelfish, for sure. |
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