Open Poetry #6 |
The time of conceive |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The time of conceive If all the world is just a stage And all my life is just a page. Then I would shine this page with light And burn a candle in the night. Against the dark of oppression, Open my heart to confession. Light a path to freedoms cause, Make my love a permanent pause. I'd give and take what is my due. Not reach the heights upon a few. I'd try my very level best, To be a pure and proper guest. I'd offer all that came my way, A proper ear and place to stay. And when your honor sews the deed There seems to be no other need. There is nought else but to believe. If human trust is to conceive. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, you do sign a page with light, again and again....and I, for one, am glad. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A pure and proper guest you have already been, dear friend And an amazing poet Beautiful thoughts and verses Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem is perfection...you certainly did light up the page...beautiful expression. very well written, take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You've graced the stage of life with elegance and light. Conception of the thoughts within your mind ... are brilliantly brought to life. Masterfully done. Loads of love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is excellent, Sy. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What a delight this poem is! Such caring and goodness radiating out of each line! Thank you for sharing this! Corinne |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful words, Sy. Lovely message within. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Your the greatest. *L* Elizabeth, You are a friend and a love. Thank you. Love Sy Janet, I love your work too. Thank you. Marge, You say the nicest things. *L* Balladeer, excellent form you is an eagle feather in my hat. Thanks. Corinne, Thank you, you shine pretty good yourself. *L* Michael, Beautiful words form a fine poet, thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Sy! Such lovely thoughts! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you so much for the lovely comment. *L* |
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