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Open Poetry #6

Destroy and Conquer

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-02-21 05:13 PM

I am very sorry.
   -can't help-
I know where you are;
   -get out-
I was there once.
   -i did-
Look somewhere else.
   -stay away-
I will hold you;
   -no more-
Laugh with you too.
   -at-
I will only hurt you;
   -destroy-
Hurting me to do so.
   -Conquer!-
Or maybe I will change.
   -YOU WILL-

**Another poem from the archive**
(Bear with me on this one, I wrote it during my mean period).

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-21 05:20 PM

well, I dont know about your "mean" period..but this is GREAT!!! very well expressed emotion with the unique and creative use of the"subliminal messages" in between each line... I really enjoyed it!
take care, janet marie

I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-21 05:24 PM

LOL...hey I just saw your reply to my poem...thanks..and come on over to Dark Passions and see us anytime...I better sneak back there before Isis catches me...smile...
janet marie

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