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| Open Poetry #6 |
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Nighttime |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Nighttime A sordid little man is he that sneaks after dark looking into windows a quest to find that which he longs for not at home but in clandestine peeps saving his dollars for another garter... another night darker than daylight begging for illumination from an intelligent conversation with the voice that never sits quiet in his mind. Robert |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
Very different. I like right to the point type of poems. Thank you for sharing. Chris Blue Moon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ouch. Now I'm confused, because I can SO relate to this 'sordid little man'. Page Dr. Freud for me please. I liked this alot tho, wish I'd thought of it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RobertB, Excellent piece of writing, enjoyed the read. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Hmmmmmm...rather revealing...  and I agree with serenity...I like...I like!... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Quite honestly, I find you brilliant, my friend. Enjoyed very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
An interesting piece, Robert, though I won't pretend that I all the way understand it. I do like some of your wording. This is an excellent phrase... "another night darker than daylight" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sordid little man that's sneaking after dark I would call it a peeping tom. I wonder if I'm close, but I know you like to leave us all with our own interpretations! You have a way of leaving it so open that it leaves one with many of those. <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi Robert ... I like this poem and I can read a lot into it ... But I can't really put a finger on the true moral here ... guess thats what makes it a true form of art ... the reader can make their own moral Rex}<{{{{o> |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
heheheheh Ummm Rex, maybe you will understand this, being in the "other" news groups.....but this only took me 2 seconds to write.....it was a goofy response to a "poet" in one of the news groups who always replies to me in crazy poems. So I thought I would give him a crazy poem as a reply. I just started typing and kinda liked what came out and posted it here to see what reactions I would get. Maybe my slump is over???? Thanks all of you!!!! Robert |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
LOL ... well I hope he liked it ... we did You know I may have wrote a few in this maner as well ... and they turn out surprisingly good because of the intense urge I had to reach out and choke someone I think I know of one or two that this poem could be applied to Rex |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
LOL!!!! You got it Rex! |
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