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Days Unsung
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Days Unsung |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Days unsung Thoughts controlled Feeling repressed Unbound soul No complaints No ones to blame Thinking in-depth All is the same Looking from inside Heart to my eyes Seeing things different Limitless skies Each moment is given To get to the next The time we are living Is only a guess For each path is taken On a whim that we felt No sure path before us We take what were dealt Don’t look behind you There’s nothing to see No changing what’s done So let it be Move forward in love Feel safe and at home Your love is the answer To questions unborn. [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 02-20-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This really touched something in me...So many of these little lines ring so true. You really gave this one some thought. I enjoyed it much - the 5th and 6th stanzas were amazing and powerful! BANG! You hit it right dead center....Bravo. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Nicely written Spiked. I find myself unable to agree with certain of your assertions but that does not detract from a good poem. Keep up the good work. INclan |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
I have to agree with INclan, some of the stuff I don't agree with, but well-written & easy on the eyes. Chris Blue Moon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sounds like you are writing from a happier place these days--how I wish I could relate to this...but I am happy for you, tho. Nice. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Not sure where this one came from wrote it this morning. Not sure I fully agree with what I wrote myself, but somethings aren't written but write themselves. Thanks for the support and serenity not everything is always as dark or as light as we think. Keep your chin up. |
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