Open Poetry #6 |
Learn To Dance Or Not |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
There are few consistencies in life, one we can count on is the rising and setting of the sun. Even the blossoms on the vine may come forth before there time, upsetting the balence in thier nature. As we beings with superior knoledge go through our life's coarse we are unable to predict with any amount of accuracy in which way to walk. But yet we only live to succeed in our visions of life and to gain the many things we think we cannot live without. Lilly's toil and spin about with only the garment God gave them, how do we as humans come to need so much and care or value life so little. By the way there is another constancy and that is death, may we learn to dance before it is to late. Cerenity-1 (AKA: Cerenity) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow..this is beautiful and rich in wisdom...very deep and thought provoking. great work...take care, janet marie Now for me some words come easy... But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. You never knew what I loved in you-- I don't know what you loved in me... Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... How long have I been sleeping- How long have I been drifting alone through the night... How long have I've dreaming I could make it right... If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need... Jackson Browne |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions.I liked your poem. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
May we learn to dance--I love this line about life. Lovely thoughts in this poem Cerenity. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...and I know what you mean..it seems like I am always starting over again. Never will be a John Travolta. James |
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