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Open Poetry #6

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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-02-07 10:57 PM

I’ll die with honor anytime, providing,
That once I die, I’ll be acclaimed a poet.
God, take my life as soon as I stop writing,
I do not want to waste a single moment.

And once I die, I have but one request,
Let me retain my senseless sensations.
Let me not sleep in my eternal rest,
Aroused by my readers' dedications.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-02-07 11:05 PM

Master-
A fitting 'Epitaph' ...
good title, huh?

This is adorably honest.
Like it much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 2000-02-07 11:29 PM

Thank you I just wrote this one, I might add more to it soon...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-02-08 11:15 AM

I really like this one Master, nicely done

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 2000-02-08 01:03 PM

Quite a wonderful poem!

Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

5 posted 2000-02-08 06:36 PM

Thank you for the kind comments!

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