Open Poetry #6 |
My Friend |
Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
God has a way of making all things right so when I write this poem, I have you in sight. I need to spend no time on these words easily they come, just feelings unheard. He guided to me you when I needed a friend no judgement, no feelings that I had to pretend. You talk, you listen, you love me for me never the hesitation when he called you to see. I share with you part of my soul my feelings and fears you seem to uphold. You caress my heart with love and grace true friendship unfolding in the presence of your face. When I am confused or overwelmed you give me yourself, never letting me down. I find it hard to say the feelings that I feel today I want you to know this love I feel is real. You brighten my day with your words, your smile I can't erase your thoughts, your style, your grace. I need you to know that my friendship is true my heart, my love, in every thought of you. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Welcome to Passions Compgirl, a very beautiful and careing post. Look forward to seeing more from you. Parker |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's like you say, you don't need to pause to think of words, they just bloom out of you like wildflowers. Great poem. Mike |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a lovely tribute to your friend, welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special welcome. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Welcome to passions, I hope to read more from you in the future. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very lovely poem. Looking forward to reading more. Welcome to Passions. |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
I thank you all for your reply. I have never felt such a warm welcome through a computer in all my life. I look forward to knowing and reading the work of you all. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Welcome to the family!! A lovely tribute to a close friend, I enjoyed reading your first post! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CompGirl~ to our family. With an entrance as lovely as this one, we will hope to see more. Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very nice writing there, hope to see more from you around here. |
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