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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-02-19 05:43 PM



I am a dancing fool I am,
I dance to your every whim
or notions. I listen and
stop and hear the gate you
wish for me to take, but
I have noticed that I am
missing something in my
step.

My feelings, my personality,
I guess you could say my soul.
My love for you is what made
me dance so contentedly but
some were along the way my
partner lost his need to dance,
the dance of love.

Your moves are onesided and
selfish, there is no magic tune
in the air, what happened did
you for get the notes. The dance
I now preform is old and repetitious,
I am willing to go back to school
if you are.

It is some times hard to undo
something ingrained into you're
every step, But I think our love
is worth it do you.
Lets dance!


    


© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-02-19 05:46 PM


Cerenity-1 is Cerenity I had computer problems and had to reregester thats.

sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-02-20 07:15 AM


I really enjoyed this Cerenity-1.  I can relate to the whole "lost his need to dance."
Sometimes, we forget why we started to dance in the first place and to find the right rhythm again can be difficult.  Your poem is truly inspiring.  I look forward to more.

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