Open Poetry #6 |
Dancing Fool |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
I am a dancing fool I am, I dance to your every whim or notions. I listen and stop and hear the gate you wish for me to take, but I have noticed that I am missing something in my step. My feelings, my personality, I guess you could say my soul. My love for you is what made me dance so contentedly but some were along the way my partner lost his need to dance, the dance of love. Your moves are onesided and selfish, there is no magic tune in the air, what happened did you for get the notes. The dance I now preform is old and repetitious, I am willing to go back to school if you are. It is some times hard to undo something ingrained into you're every step, But I think our love is worth it do you. Lets dance! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Cerenity-1 is Cerenity I had computer problems and had to reregester thats. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I really enjoyed this Cerenity-1. I can relate to the whole "lost his need to dance." Sometimes, we forget why we started to dance in the first place and to find the right rhythm again can be difficult. Your poem is truly inspiring. I look forward to more. |
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