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vandana
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0 posted 2000-02-19 01:29 PM



I don't want to die,
   Befoe I go to heaven,
There's so much to see
    I want to watch the candle glow,
I want to watch the moon and stars,
     It's too early to die,
I don't want to die,
     I can see the roses dying,
I want to hare things with the world,
     I want to show how good Iam,
There's so much to see around the world,
       The star is falling
when I kiss the sun goodbye,
    I don't want to go just yet,
The furture is right ahead,
     The world is waiting fgor me,
I touch the flower,
     When the rain is falling,
There's so much to see,
      I hear the music
when I sit ,
    life is short,
But there's so much to see,
     I want to see river run,
Through the sand
There's so much to see,

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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 2000-02-19 01:38 PM


There is so much to see indeed, and do, and love.  This is a beautiful world, if we just look past the smoke screen that often times clouds our hearts vision.
Very nice poem!
Danny

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-02-19 07:43 PM


VanDana~
And, you will see it all.
Very nice sentiments, dear.

Ah, to see the river run
to see the ocean wave
to see the flower bloom
to see love pass my way ...
of these is Heaven made.
~*Marge*~




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Denise
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3 posted 2000-02-19 11:04 PM


Beautiful thoughts, Vandana!  

Denise

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