Open Poetry #6 |
The Point Of View From A Jew's Old Shoe |
Jason Danes New Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 5 |
I have strived through The marches,the stress And the strain. I have Seen many deaths, and felt Their gruesome pain. Like a Colony of tiny ants, we walked on and on. We had no one to talk to, our family was gone.There Was nothing to drink,no food to eat. People were Stumbling every- where, their legs were brittle and Weak. Now I sit and ponder, a dirty leather Shoe... That once was placed upon the foot of a helpless,innocent Jew. [This message has been edited by Jason Danes (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jason- This is a poignant piece. Welcome to Passion's ... this is truth hauntingly told. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Interesting point of view--I never would of thought of it myself...and you told it so wonderfully. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Excellent poem. Welcome to Passions We can only hope that the world learned from the holocaust and that such atrocities will never happen again, of course, they kinda did in Kosovo, *sigh* when will the world learn..... I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Jason, such emotion, I enjoyed this, yet it tears at my heart! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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