Open Poetry #6 |
Every Day |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This one is for Isis. . . . Every day we speak to each other Without really saying a word Every day the words she writes Are the sweetest things I've ever heard Every day I see her heart I see its ups and its downs Every day I try to make her day To fill it with smiles instead of frowns Every day I see her face I see the warmth and love in her eyes Every day I see her smile Its brightness rivals the eastern sunrise Every day we grow closer Kindred of spirit and kindred of heart Every day our spirits fly together Together we'll always be, spirits that will never part ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sven, what a beautiful poem! I am most sure that Isis will wholeheartedly enjoy it. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A wonderful poem for a sweet lady! Good job! |
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cK Navarro Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 21Helsinki Finland |
Nice poem you got here! Greetings from Finland cK |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Such sweet words of compassion, Sven, and a beautiful tribute! Corinne |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Kindred spirits are very special and you have captured that beauty in this poem. She is a lucky lady. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sven, this is very lovely. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Beautiful Sven....just beautiful. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The cerebral connections we make here are quite astounding, aren't they? Nice work, Sven.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . and yes Nan. . . they are. . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven hon, you are an angel and indeed my kindred. It is wonderful how we have each other to lean on, to be there for one another. I thank you for this loving tribute and our loving friendship. (HUGS) my kindred and thankyou. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven there is so much love and admiration in this poem and I know she feels the same for you. A joy to read for I love her too. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sven...what a nice poem for a wonderful person. She is lucky to have a friend, a muse, such as yourself |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
With words like these, your frienship will get closer every day Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Again. . . thank you all. .. Elizabeth--I know that we will grow closer day by day. . . thank you. . . Hoot--Yes, she is indeed one of my muses. . . I'm sure you know who the other one is. . .that's at least 2. . . aren't there 9? I need 7 more! LOL James--I know how you feel about Isis. . .and it's good to know that she has so many friends. . . Isis--I am so glad that you liked it. . . you are indeed my muse and I am so thankful for our special friendship. . . it does indeed help me and makes me feel good. . . thank you my kindred. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is soooo sweet Sven...you are quite a man!!! Nothing lasts longer than friendship...except maybe true love!!!!< !signature--> Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 02-21-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven that is so beautiful, what a great tribute to Isis. WONDERFUL tracie |
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