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Do You Remember When??
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Do You Remember When?? |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Do you remember when I told you about someplace special to me, about the only place I knew I could go to express my true feelings? Do you remember when I said it meant the world to me? That even though no one know who I am, they still care about me? Do you remember when I showed you my special place when I gave you the key to my feelings, and trusted you to see them, but not to interfere? Do you remember when you knocked down the walls of this place, so that they landed on top of me? Or how you've wreaked havoc on my emotions? You've destroyed my sanctuary... ~Kristi Lynn "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Kristi, this place has been my sanctuary and I hope that your able to find the same peace of mind here that you once knew. This is sad but very nicely worded. Thank you for sharing and I hope things get better for you  Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I hope so, too. This is the one place I was able to go to speak my mind, my true feelings... I hope it gets better... Thank you for your response. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
How terrible you must feel ... but tomorrow brings another day ... and you've already found the secret entrance to passions Rex}<{{{{o> |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thanks much for your reply, Rex. It means a lot, and Passions seems to be what he wants to destroy for me, but I won't let that happen... I love it here, and being able to say exactly how I feel without being criticized means a lot. Thank you all. ~Kristi Lynn  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is well written. I have read some of your peoms in Teen Poetry and have enjoyed them also. Though some of your poems are sad, they are expressed well and show your emotion. Nice work! Danny |
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