Open Poetry #6 |
Striving.... |
Rod17WA New Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 4 |
The pain I feel is endless, my heart aches, my soul is dying, I've lied, I've hurt everyone around me, even my own mother. And all for a forbidden love, for a forbidden life, I wish things could be different, and again I hear you crying, But even though I know its all wrong, I'm still striving, I dont know where im gonna end up, but I just hope one day You'll forgive me, and understand, that I wont stop untill the end... |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
That's certainly a different view point... from the person who feels at fault, but can't "stop" whatever it is he is doing, even though he knows in his heart of it's damage. Interesting indeed. If only words of such could be spoken at the right time, to the right person. Sigh. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rod~ you shouldn't make your Mom cry........other than that, this was sad but written very well. -SEA |
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