Open Poetry #6 |
Dialogue (Just trying something different) |
CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Dialogue You ask me, "Have you loved before?" "Felt a feeling inside, that you just can't ignore" I answer, "Never." You ask me, "Have you opened your eyes?" "To a love that's so great, you just can't disguise?" I answer, "Never." You ask me, "Have you ever felt needed?" "Like your time was well spent, and should be repeated?" I answer, "Never." I'm thinking, "Before you." To Renee. Christopher M. Grimm Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
I love the way you express your love for your wife in this. As she is the one and only you have loved. Great job Rich |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is lovely, Chris. So much said in this short conversation...thanks for sharing it here. |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
How sweet..... |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Different obviously works for you, Chris. I enjoyed the dialogue, both verbal and mental. [This message has been edited by freckles (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
This pooem is so beautiful and also very relavent to me as i have recently gotten engaged. your poem describes the emotins of my love perfectly...thanks for sharing. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chris Grimm~ This is a lovely departure. "Have you ever felt needed? Like your time was well spent, and should be repeated?" Now THAT is a wonderful thought process. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This was very beautiful. Questions I think we all need to ask ourselves. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks everyone for the sweet responses. You've all made my day. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
CMGrimm, It,s nice to hear the love coming from this poem that is between the two of you, it is refreashing. Cerenity |
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