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Where do lonely hearts go?
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Where do lonely hearts go? |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Where do lonely hearts go when love is in the past? with emptiness everywhere only hours of despair does anyone really care when fragrance leaves the air now frozen to this chair life lost its recent flair venture out I do not dare broken heart beyond repair full meal is now so rare nary an emotion left to spare for work I can't prepare of you I mostly swear wrinkled clothes I only wear my soul no longer to bare no future now can compare nothing left for me to share come the nights with a scare Where do lonely hearts go, when true love doesn't last? Someone take me there......... < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
I liked this poem, nice ryhme. Exactly where do lonely hearts go? The personal ads????? hahaha Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
nice consistant rhyming. it is a dilemma, isnt it? |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
NICE POEM LIKE THAT LIKE CURVE YOU PUT IN IT. WHEN YOU FIND THAT PLACE CAN YOU LET ME KNOW WHERE IT IS?  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Very interesting question Danny. I wish I knew the answer to it myself. I believe they are left to wander until they find their true home, arms that will hold forever more. Either that or I am full of it...lol. We may be destined to wander alone, finding peace in ourselves. We will never know the answer to this question until we find our home, then it is unimportant, no? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Danny....when you find out, please send me directions |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
I wish I knew where broken hearts should go after love has left them nothing to follow a place of comforting full of heart resurecting making broken pieces sing healing the hurtful everything a place for wounded consoling making fragile hearts ring vacant of trust in pretending full of gentle mending a place of rebirthing I wish I knew where broken hearts should go after love has left them hollow. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lonely hearts wander free written here as poetry where do lonely hearts go? Passions Forums, don't you know.... |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Danny... I know where lonely hearts go.  To a land of tears. I felt every word you wrote. B Gravitt |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Where do lonely hearts go, I think they follow me around. So lets all go for a beer, and forget where lonley hearts go. Great poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ Am posting an answer from another poet's pen. I really enjoyed this one from you. I find your writing very intriguing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
LOL@James!!!! I'm game for the drink!!!hehe I do believe they reside in the all too addicting passionate forums!!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
They all go to the Lonley Heart's Club, don't you know, it's at the corner of Love Everlasting and I Found Someone New, right next to the Heart Break Hotel. I liked your poem. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
*laughing at James too* I don't Know either...I've been wandering for a long time myself...in fact...I think I'm lost...*bewildered look* Great poem Danny! I love your rhyming tactics... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Lucy's In! Where do broken hearts go... back togeather I believe broken hearts go to pieces, tiny shards, then the mind takes each one of the tiny shards and absorbs its every aspect when the mind has what it can put of the puzzle together it gives us a lesson, some learn from it, others improve with it, and some choose to store only its good in their dreams, but only when we can think of a past broken heart with a smile has the puzzle been completed and we have all these things to treasure and what once hurt us so much has given so much more, including a new and stronger heart Five cents please....lol A wonderful poem you've written..... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Just want to say thanks for all the nice responses to my poem. January Flowers, very nice response poem! Haleyja, a beer is a great idea, and I am so excited that everyone is joining us. I believe I'll have a shot with my beer! and Poet deVine, you are right, poetry is the place. Marge, thank you for the poem. See Comments! Thanks again to all. Such nice people out there! Danny |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad and beautiful, Danny. Nicely done! Denise |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Now Danny... You can't run around in wrinkled clothes. You'll stay lonely forever. Get the iron out, turn up the heat and tell us what you really want. I like the way this is written...the curve and all. Good job!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Danny~ I have only to echo Tori. She read my mind. Or we think alike! This is really sad Danny, I hope you can put the pieces back together or find a stronger way to build your heart. Hugs-SEA |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Need some company? Grab a ticket for me too, would ya? I see we feel much the same of late. Michael |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Where do they go?hhhmmm...I can`t answer that one but I do know that many times a Broken Heart Becomes The DoorMat of another. Nice writing Danny Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ Just wanted to read it again. What a wonderful rhyming scheme you used and what a flowing presentation. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Danny,I've been reading your work,And I thought I should let you know Keep it up.Nice work. [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 02-18-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Greetings to all who posted responses to my poem. This is the most responses I have received on Passions and it must mean my writing is getting better. Thanks to all, and especially to Marge, who is such a sweet person, and a friend to all who post their poetry in these halls of creative writing. Sincerely, Danny |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful poem Well written Well presented I just don't know the answer Liz |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
when you know the answer to that, then you'll know everything. nice work danny. how do i get this many responses??? lol. lonely hearts ive found, like to spill whats left of them onto paper, or in this case, computers screens. at least thats my motive. talk to you soon, aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I can only sigh when reading this ryhme Presentation and expression are exquisite  Coco |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well written! great design! |
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