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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2000-02-15 11:06 PM

Tu puedes llover

Tu puedes llover
en este lugar
Tu puedes llover
en mi cuerpo
usted puedes llover
dentro de mí.

Translated:

You can rain
inside this room
you can rain
upon my body
you can rain
inside of me.

(c) 2000 Corinne Bailey

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-02-15 11:12 PM

Corinne~
You ROCK !
This is so YOU !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

2 posted 2000-02-15 11:18 PM

WOW!! In all the years of reading and writing poety I've never...well...I've just never. Thank you.

Chris

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2000-02-15 11:23 PM

mi lluvia quiere cubrirte en un gran tormenta, mi vida.

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

4 posted 2000-02-16 12:51 PM

Corinne, Your talent is so versatile. Your poetry so deep of message, inviting between those sweetly read lines. The meaning so pleasurefull, I shudder at the next coming of your poetic movements.

Parker

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2000-02-16 12:52 PM

Marge, thank you so much!!! I was a bit hesitant to put me on display! LOL

Chris, you've never what? LOL Thank you.

and Balladeer, mi poeta dulce, le deseo la sol siempre.

[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-16-2000).]

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2000-02-16 12:56 PM

Why parker, thank you! You are very kind,indeed sir!

Corinne

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2000-02-16 01:07 AM

It's obvious to me your poetry is good in any language. Thanks for sharing! (no time for doubts)

Mike

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2000-02-16 10:54 AM

Thank you so much, Mike!

Corinne

John Yaws
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

9 posted 2000-02-16 11:06 AM

Este es muy hermosa, Senorita. Un mil de gracias. Y tu tampoco puedes llover en mi corazon. Hasta luego!
~El Pistolero~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2000-02-16 12:37 PM

This is beautiful, Corinne!

Denise

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

11 posted 2000-02-16 04:13 PM

Gracias, Corinne. Como yo vivo in la Florida, es seguro que siempre voy a tener mucho sol. Agradezco sus palabras.

Gunslinger, you old bi-lingual cowboy!! Who da thunk it? (Try "tambien" instead of "tampoco"

)

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

12 posted 2000-02-16 05:56 PM

Denise - muchas gracias!

Gracias, Gunslinger! Lluvia puede ser tal metáfora del wonderul, si?

Sí, Balladeer, pero, era discurso del sol dentro de su casa, mi poeta dulce!

Fielmente el tuyo,

Corina Maria

HelmutB
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

13 posted 2000-02-16 09:12 PM

Sure that's all easy for you to say

Das Gedicht ist so kurz
Aber dennoch so Bedeutungsvoll

The peom is so short
But yet the words are so meaningful

Lovely poem Corinne, may it always rain for you. Well with lots of Sunshine too

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