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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Rose red sanctity of your candy-sweet kisses brings me to my knees. It might be worship. It might be devotion. It is my prayer. Worship with me then, honey lips at my altar - breathe my confession. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beki~ Wow! This brings a vivid picture to my mind! Great poem!  -SEA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beki, really loved this one, especially the last 3 lines! Well Done!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Beki, this is an amazing piece. I loved it. I'll be looking out for more of you. Thanks Chris |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks a bunch, Sea, Dark Angel, and Chris....glad you enjoyed. Chris, I have lots here at Passions, please do a search and check them out. Also visit my website http://www.room1401.com/beki |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sweet and short - but not simple - excellent!! K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Severn. I wrote this so spontaneously I hesitated to post it but the more I read it the more I like it, especially for what it DOESN'T say, the pauses that make the music if you know what I mean. Anyway, I am glad others are enjoying it too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beki~ Refreshingly unique. I like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beki...this is exceptional. You did a splended job writing this one |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
{{Beki wears a BIG smile}} Thank you very much Marge and Hoot! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
powerful, exceptional....wow....stunning...just don't have the words...love this beki |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Coarazon, for reading and for your generous comments |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Beki, yes this is very vivid, loved it. Parker |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
{{BEKI curtsies}}Thank you Parker |
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Glorfindel Junior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 22Auckland, New Zealand |
Hi Beki, you have my first ever reply, and I must say this is a jewel. The shorter ones always seem to say so much more! I LOVED the last stanza. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Beki, nicely written with such a sensitive, soulful touch. You must have been sitting on the beach when you wrote it. Lucky Lady! Danny |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Glorfindel, I am flattered to be your first ever response, and more glad that you liked the poem Danny thanks for your nice comments...not on the beach but certainly within view of the harbor [This message has been edited by Beki (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I confess.... this succinct work speaks clearly... I like it muchly..  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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