Open Poetry #6 |
A tragic love tale |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Love is wondrous deeply felt Upon the stony path you knelt Never did you utter a word For if you did it was not heard Your love was cold, she had no life You had come to make her your wife What you saw that fateful day Was a lifeless figure, you began to pray Pray your loved one was not this being Pray that this was not what you were seeing There was no breath or heartbeat found your own heart to would no longer pound For on that day your heart did break and your own life you did take |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Tears of sorrow fall for two. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
tracie, Wow very very sad. Well Done What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
While I was writing this I pictured that it was in maybe medieval times, I picture a knight kneeling by his beloved lady and you know the rest. Thanks for your replies Marge and Dark Angel.. Tracie |
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