Open Poetry #6 |
My Forbidden and Secret Love |
silvershaddow Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19 |
My Forbidden and Secret Love You know I'll always trust you I know you'll take good care Its not 'cause of you that I worry But the other idiots out there. I know that now you're taken And I know that you'll never be mine But please don't leave me on my own For any length of time. Each time you enter into my life I smile my secret smile And the flame in my heart burns brighter Just being with you for a while. But when you leave me on my own I shed my secret tear For although I know that I shouldn't I like to hold you near. And as I try and close this chapter, I must accept that it'll never be And wish you all the happiness Just you, and her, not me. [This message has been edited by silvershaddow (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
This is amazing, I wish I could write this well, you have a great way with words, I like this loads, and we all have those forbiden loves, the ones we can't have, shouldn't want but still do, this links in quite nicely with the idea of temptation and my poem 'Heaven or Hell', fancy doing a joint effort some time ? |
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