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| Open Poetry #6 |
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a short one |
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dash rendor Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 21 |
Gentle rocking A sloshing sound Softly drips Far away splash Quiet wind whistles The sounds inside My lonely heart Soothing but sad Free and restricted Gentle yet raging Bonds of loneliness Bonds for love Empty hearts Will float forever On a sea of tears Crying for love |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Dash! This is so sad yet so beautiful! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I really like the flow you have going here. The message is clear and descriptive. Marina |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Your use of "s"s greatly increases the effect of this when read aloud. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done ....welcome to passions  |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Nice one Dash. I'll be looking forward to see more from you. Welcome to passions. Chris |
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