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Gray Dawn (Haiku)
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Gray Dawn (Haiku) |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
gray dawn on Spring grass black cows repose chewing cud drizzle washes all |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OK,let's see, lesson for the day is...if I study INclan's work close enough, I might get it! Well done - and as this is a theme close to my heart, I can say you painted the picture quite well... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INclan~ Nicely done. Very picturesque. Aren't these just the most fantastic fun to have pop into your mind? I'm fascinated with them also. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Sunshine, I am flattered that someone with your posting experience would study me. Thank you for your gracious response. Marge, They are indeed fun. I was commuting up to work, in Culver, and came upon that scene near Kewanna. I really enjoy the syllable limitations of Haiku. It forces me to say exactly what I want without ANY wasted words. Thank you for responding. INclan |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Delightful,INclan  ") |
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