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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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0 posted 2000-04-17 02:46 AM


Will always listen
to cusps of words
sread over feathers
tucked tightly.
My wooden eyes
peer threw tree holes,
at dancing reeds
with thier friends.
Silently, tongue can finally open
into the crack of morning,
before the sun is shinning.
Threw all the night
I sat
and waited
for the earth to turn,
and portray what I have been feeling.



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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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1 posted 2000-04-17 05:40 AM


Interesting life prospective, Redbraids.
Pretty mournful poem.

netswan

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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2 posted 2000-04-17 02:35 PM


thanx for checking it out and being honest. i wrote it at the crack of dawn, obviously, so i was pretty weary eyed, and dreamy.
i really like your contibution to our mother earth, and i'm a going to read more of your writing, i really like you style, and am glad to hear words that relate to what gives us our breath and our wonder.
thank you kindly,
redbraids

lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
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3 posted 2000-04-20 12:38 PM


Hey redheart, Cool poem and COOL name! very good work.
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4 posted 2001-02-17 05:18 PM


SweetLittleFriend~
I hope this reply finds you happy !
You are missed here among the family circle.
A sweet, sweet write from the little heart of you.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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