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My Mess |
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Kaiyu New Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 7 |
My Mess This house is chaotic yet, here I sit to write it’s nauseating and sick to look at; what a sight Nothing is where it should be so much clutter to sift through, I know a sure remedy, but its not the to do! The mere thought has got me pooped! Before I even begin, why this big mess has me duped, is because “I” brought it in!!!! I created this total bedlam without too much assistance I could really use a hand As I take a better glance I doubt I’d find a cheerful lass, once she sees this sorry mess I can’t really bring myself to ask, so it’s just “myself,” I guess now, to get me self off my rear to making headway around here The “dilemma” for today had better be solved without delay Time’s awastin’ as I sit and soon I’ll be in a heap of **** By, Kaiyu |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
rotflmao hahahha -- Well, you are fabulous - Kaiyu. Such a talent to write surrounded by a mess. Oh you will find your lass who will clean up your mess - Just write her beautiful poems and she just may try her best. Thanks for sharing, Enjoyed netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I hate to admit this but I can totally relate...lol Great poem Jeffrey |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kaiyu, Oh my dear I've seen this mess you speak of and yes "YOU have a MESS" but my love I am the cheerful lass that will help you solve your dilemma and when were done cleaning up your**** will get back to what we love and that is our passion in poetry. I do so welcome you my friend, Cerenity To anyone who reads this, Kaiyu is a dear friend of mine, who I have encouraged to post her work here at passions. |
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