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Remember me... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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If I should leave before my time remember me this way and know that Winter's colors touched me more than I can say I've gazed upon a coastline that brought joy beyond compare and if you stand upon these cliffs I know you'll find me there I keep your laughter in my heart for all eternity it was and always will remain a symphony to me Perhaps at times it seemed to you I walked with weary trod but I have seen your smile and thus looked in the eyes of God I'm not waving, I'm drowning! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, this is an exquisite poem! Lovely and haunting and much, much too sad! The last two verses touched me very deeply. I'm going to keep this one in my file of treasures. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Echo~ This is lilting and lovely. So good to have you here again to share your thoughts with us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem Echo ! Good to see you again.  Could you give us an update on you in one of the forums ? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you all so much...I wasn't going to postt his poem, but I was convinced to  Glad you like it!Munda...update about me? What kind of update do you want?..or even so..why LoL? I'm not waving, I'm drowning! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Melanie, the last thing I heard was you were 'leaving on a jetplane' to make your dream come true and never found out if you did. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Melanie- Glad to have you back sweetness!! I hope you found your dreams along your way back to us!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow!! Two poems in the same weekend!! We are indeed blessed!! This was wonderful Melanie. . . I can see that your time away has done wonders for you!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully written. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well Melanie, I'm glad you listened! Or should I say convinced?  I love this and I've told you how much it has touched me. And I see it's doing the same for others. Share your gift my dear! Thanks Melanie for posting this, I appreciate it! Much love and many hugs to ya! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Melanie! Denise |
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