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LoveBug
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0 posted 2000-04-16 01:16 PM


I saw my first rainbow today
God's promise of love and better times
Touched my broken soul
As it touched Noah as he stood on a broken earth

For the first time in a long while
I felt love, REAL love
Love for the One that will always be there
The One who will never reject me

As the storm blows on
And the rains comes down
And the sky is black with storm clouds
In my own little word

I saw, through the mist of rain
Outside my window
God's glimmer of hope
His promise

For, if I can get through this
If I live through the flood
And the storm within my soul
I will be stronger...
And it will never flood again

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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1 posted 2000-04-16 01:28 PM


LoveBug~
A beautiful RAINBOW you've painted.

Yes, honey ... His promise holds true.
And He holds you.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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Pepper
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2 posted 2000-04-16 01:34 PM


Lovely, LoveBug .....
I love Rainbows and the beauty of the promise ........

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

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3 posted 2000-04-16 01:37 PM


LoveBug,
This is beautiful.  So very true, He is the one who will be there through thick and thin, no matter what.  The One we can count on to help ease the load when the burden becomes too heavy to bear.  Wonderful message and poem!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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4 posted 2000-04-16 05:34 PM


Great poem Lovebug,
Loved it

Jeffrey

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5 posted 2000-04-16 05:59 PM


Sweetheart:  However bad the storms, the sun will one day come along and peep through the clouds...I like to think that nature brings us so much beauty that we can find a little peace...I love all the elements, love to stand in the rain, hear the thunder, watch the clouds as they race each other and turn my face to the sun to feel its warmth because nature can't hurt you, it can only bring peace and so I hope that rainbow you saw will bring you peace as well..

HUGS

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