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Don't walk away
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Don't walk away |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Don't walk away, It's hurt me when you leave me behind, Do you see my tears falling, Won't you wipe my fears away, I'm scared to loose you, I know, I won't able to see you again, So,kiss me goodbye, Then I won't miss you that much, I know, your love has meaning to it, and I will keep our alive, No matter you don't live with me, But I will remember this moment and never forget you , Even though, you will walk away from me,But please at least last time, Will you hold me? when you told me you love me, now you've hurt me and break my heart, Please,baby, Don't walk away from me, Don't walk away [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Pleading poem! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done Vandana... enjoyed your poem a lot. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So heartbreaking! vandana, write us a poem where you two finally get together! I can't stand it anymore. This guy must be blind! But this was beautiful, anyway Love ya Liz |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana, you shouldn't beg for what your heart deserves, but hey, even I know that is much easier said than done! (I've begged a few times myself!)  This is good! -SEA |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Right on! Shout it from the roof tops girl!!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such a sad poem  |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Such a sad poem. Did you two ever get together?  I hope so. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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