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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Unknown Love I think love is a feeling that surpasses all other feelings, Love is the rare sensation one feels when their good emotions become them. Love is when you lay on your bed at night, And feel like your heart is going to explode because you can’t stop thinking about the one you love. When you look into their eyes and you see nothing but perfection. You see nothing but all the good qualities about them Love is when you feel the pain that they are going through, And you feel the pain they are not going through. You know you’re in love when you hold there hand, And you’re heart races with joy. You close your eyes and visualize yourself just looking at them. Just admiring how wonderful one person can possibly be. When you think about them, You can’t help but smile because you can’t hold in how good you are feeling. And when you are in Love, You know that if something was to ever happen to them, You would cry until you could no longer open your eyes, Then you would cry even more. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
I think you are so right - Love is a strong emotion - Great Poem -- I loved the ending Teresa King |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
great poem but you forgot one thing that love is Love waking up beside someone and you can't wait to talk to them because you missed them while you were asleep Jeffrey |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh...Yes..LOVED it! There is so much to write about love, it is hard to fit it into one poem!  I feel the same as you with your poem...I can relate, this is how I am when I am in love  "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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