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Open Poetry #6

Millenium

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-02-14 01:01 AM

Visions of laughter
Thoughts of the past
Looking to the future
Hoping it will last
We approach a new time
A millennium of sort
Where our future and past cross
Which path do we take?
My mind and thoughts lost
I look for the answers
But none can be found
Only time has these answers.
Oh father time hold me
Assist me to see
What the coming year baby
Has in store for me.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-02-14 11:22 PM

Wistful and sweet, spiked, I like this. You should express this side of yourself more often. Lovely.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2000-02-15 01:01 AM

Thanks serenity
not all is dark I do see light sometimes.
Just don't usually put that side in words.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-02-15 01:05 AM

And you are up late tonight...

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2000-02-15 01:08 AM

just checking out to see if you read this syrupy crap lol.

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

5 posted 2000-02-15 01:11 AM

Nicely written spiked. Very interested in reading more from you.

Chris

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2000-02-15 01:15 AM

thanks cwgrimm
wonderful getting what I write read by so many great writers. Makes me feel a part of something.

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 02-15-2000).]

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