Open Poetry #6 |
Wherever. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wherever i am there you are be it earth of the farthest star wherever i am there you are wherever you are there am i be it ground or in the sky wherever you are there am i wherever we are there is love love so pure and sent from above wherever we are there is love -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This makes it quit a challenge for Hide and Seek now doesn't it!! Remind me not to play with you! Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
DIVINE DEVOTION!!!! you write it OH SO well. perfect Sven, take care,jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such a sweet simple poem with simple words and a simple pledge of love. Simply lovely!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Very nice enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ You do a very nice job with these lovely poems. I so enjoy the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . Marina, it definitely makes Hide and Seek a lot more fun!! Janet, thank you. . . Divine? Well, ok. . . deVine, sometimes, you don't need a lot of words to say what's in your heart. . . Sy, always good to hear from you, my friend. . . Marge, thank you, it's just the way that I am. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful love poem, I'm glad that you have found true love. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely, Lovely, Lovely .... Hey Sven; can you tell I like this piece?!!! "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lovebug. . .thank you. . . it's wonderful.. . Pepper, no, I can't tell that you really like this one! LOL. . .thank you too, my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Simple and sweet. Nicely put!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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