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Response to response (For Liz)
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Response to response (For Liz) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Response to response (For Liz) 'Twas I that sent the meadow lark, On open wings into the dark. To set upon the weathered post, With a message from this host. 'Twas not a song of warbling bird, But my spirit that you heard. Given in the meadowlarks cry, To tell you how I pine and sigh. I sent it on the mornings breeze, A serenade, a songs appease. To know the truth of what I felt, Before the morning dew could melt. To tell you of my idealize, To help you come to realize. The message that ensnares the wind, Can never ever be exscind. This spirit circles only you, It only sings of what is true. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Thanking you for your reply To my poem of a songbird's cry A melody with my name I heard How did you train that little bird? Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Well, now that we're all a'twitter ... this is wonderful ! You two still do the greatest HE said ... SHE said ! May it ever be so. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A beautiful answer Glad you enjoyed the read. Love Sy Marge, Thank you so much for the sweet comment. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so great to read Sy what perfect rhyme flow and the imagery is superb. very nice kind sir. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Thank you so much for the sweet comment. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I found another smile in my remember of Seymour~  ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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