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Once I knew
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Once I knew |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Softly heavnly gazed into me, Love russin, Once in life time, And for the last time, Far from distance, space and time, Between us, Without an end, And thought it was untrue, untill you beleive in me, Untill there all at once I knew you're the one for me, your eyes showed me, something special that I found your love, your eyes hold me so, your eyes gazed into mine, I looked into eyes, I felll so deep for you, there were no words for me to say, As I stood there, slowly gazed into your eyes, I see your love into my eyes, I could see you and noone else, You and me in the rain, I saw the changes between us, As love russin for a life time, And last time, There were no beginning, No end without any story, At once I knew, At once I knew it, I had it all, You're the one for ,e, At once I knew |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Lovely, my dear. 'At once I knew' Just a beautiful thought from your heart. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~~~~~~~Nice writing vandana~~~~~~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I thought it was wonderful! Kathleen |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice Vandana... like your poem... *smile* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely thoughts, Vandana! Denise |
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