Open Poetry #6 |
What I Long For.....................#2 |
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I am tired of winter and find myself longing for those summer nights again. I long for awesome sunsets Someone to share them with, Romantic walks along the beach A passionate, tender kiss. I long for summer nights To lay beneath the moon, Make love under twinklin stars Or in the park at noon. I long for summer dances In a field filled high with wheat, Or the coldness of a stream Where we could hang our feet. Romantic dinners by candlelight A loving word from you, A warm and steamy bath With bubbles filled for two. <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
may a try to be the first to say very sweet sentiments ther but Dove! makin love in the park at noon woowoo i didnt know yuh had it in yuh!! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Rebecca! I'm ready too! (but like Walt said what's with this making love in the park at noon? hehehehe) Denise |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
great job!! I can't wait till summer either it can be so romantic! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful, Rebecca! This is so romantic.. a perfect addition to Valentine's Day... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Walt, you would pick that out wouldn't ya? haha...one never knows...hahaha LOL Denise! Thanks sweetie! Uh I take the 5th, can I do that? haha Crazy Chick, I can't wait either! Thanks! Devine thank you! Yea, that warms your heart even if it's cold outside! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Verrrry nice Rebecca, But the only park around here is Glacier Park and it's not really my cup of tea but then again I suppose theyr's ya alls out theyr who be liken ice tea. Again very nice. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel, woohoo this is something, really special it is not to mention beautiful and romantic. Loved it well Done!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ Lovely, just lovely. Been there ... done that ! Look forward to Spring to do it again ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Lucky! All right y'all, get off the park thing! hahaha Thank you Lucky! DA, thanks girlfriend! Hugs to ya girl, miss ya round lately... Marge thank you! I look forward to it too! Seems we're having late winter for it's snowing again today! Happy Valentine's Day to you all! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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