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Mercy, Master, Please....
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Mercy, Master, Please.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I simply do not have the heart to stand within these rules of game. Do you not know? Can you not see? I stand before you, changed. Have you not read? Do you not feel my words my heart sincerity? I pray I'm not left lonely, here... Did all my hurt blow past your ear? Did you not say you'd dry my tears? My God, it is too lonely here. My pen is cursed-- it writes in tears. Tell me I'm not wrong again. Lie to me or call me "friend". Whisper, If I must relent-- must I blow ash of passion, spent? Be merciful Be kind to me. Speak to me cruel clarity. Command the tide, return to sea. Tell me you've no need of me. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I simply do not have the heart to stand within these rules of game. Do you not know? Can you not see? I stand before you, changed. ----------------- Did all my hurt blow past your ear? Did you not say you'd dry my tears? My God, it is too lonely here. My pen is cursed-- it writes in tears. Tell me I'm not wrong again. Lie to me or call me "friend". Whisper, If I must relent-- must I blow ash of passion, spent? ----------------- Command the tide, return to sea. Tell me you've no need of me. ------------------ serenitiy this is so beautiful, so sweetly sad, i love the flow of it... but your tender emotions in it are so perfect... its like a fragile rose bud. who could not need our little sweet serenity... *kiss kiss* on sweetcheeks. *S* jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So soft and quietly spoken with words of someone so terribly hurt and alone. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
To JM--who understands me--thank you, I go to sleep the day away, now... and to Tracie--I thank you for your sympathy--but all will be well, I think...methinks me thinks too much sometimes.... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, this was very sincere. Lie to me or call me "friend". Whisper, If I must relent-- must I blow ash of passion, spent? .... I really liked the whole poem and these lines, could I whisper sweet lies to you? Parker |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, You are an effective writer and I enjoy reading all your poetry. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, Those tears sure do make wonderful words. Expresses the sadness and hurt in your heart very well. Nice job!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sad poem, albeit very emotional and gutwrenching it is still beautiful in a way that I can't describe Just remember that if we have faith in God we are never truly alone. Jeffrey |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
What have I done to cause this pother? If I am guilty, then in shame! I pray that it was all another Who has the nerve to wear my name! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Serenity, the sadness just drips from this poem like the tears that you must have shed writing it. . . Hoping that things go well, and that you're just thinking too much.. . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Parker--pleased to hear from you--it is an honor. Just seeing your name has brightened my day... Sy------Another Surprise! I read & enjoy YOUR work immensely. Thank you for your kind attention. Lone wolf-as always, I cherish your praise! Jeffry C--(Better?) Can't tell you how much your replies have cheered me...Do don't stop... Sven----my lovely empath friend--I hug you to my heart...profound thanks. And Master... No, it is not true I've any pain that's caused by you! It is another I bemoan... I'm hoping that it's just hormones! And thanks to all for your thoughtfulness. |
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