Open Poetry #6 |
'Til the End |
bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
(this one was written for my best friend on her 18th birthday...just thought I'd share it. ) 'Til the End ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Friends 'til the end-- that was the promise. through good times and bad through happy and sad... through new friends old friends and some in-between friends... through sleepovers and prank calls through envying anyone tall... through boyfriends and breakups through hangovers with hiccups... through parties 'til two through grounding with you... through homework and teachers and games in the bleachers... through betrayal and lies through heartache and good-byes... through gazing at stars and cruising in cars we swore we would go far... through the past through the present through the future... friends 'til the end. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I love this, it sums it all up! Friends to the end. WELCOME <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, I like this!!! If I'd know Rebecca years ago, we could say this was about us! Did your friend like this poem? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BobbyCat- I've held hands with a friend, like you mention, for all time. Friends ... for the keeping. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
You did a great job!!! friends are so special, especially friends till the end!!! |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
THANK YOU to everyone for the great responses...I am so glad y'all liked it! As a matter of fact, PdV, I wrote this out on parchment paper in calligraphy for my friend, then framed it and gave it to her....she still has it hanging on her wall. Friends 'til the end.......... Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is really sweet, I hope she realizes what a good friend she has in you!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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