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I Surprised Myself
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I Surprised Myself |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I Surprised Myself I get all crazy inside when I watch him out there spinning around every curve with room to spare he creeps and he crawls distances for positions intimidates all those around with wise decisions. He could run a cheetah and still come out in front he battles and sometimes he's gets a hard brunt all in all I as much as many others desire him first as most the fans sit around quenching their thirst. The locality facilitates many a race thrilled patron they all become energized like that of an electron all with totally different agenda's to pleasantly offer there'll always be some that will undoubtedly suffer. I surprised myself tonight thinking qualifying was dull as there he was spinning the track my thoughts null my blood pressure elevated I was alive in nervous joy he qualified second outside the pole in front of his boy. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great poem, but who did what? explain to my ignorant ears Jeffrey |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I'm a big time Dale Earnhardt fan, and as i watched him qualify he made it to second position in front of his son Jr. He droped down a few after that, but not much I think come Sunday he will start the race 5th in Talladega, I will be on the edge of the couch that whole race, cause anything can and will happen there. Thanks for reading hope this made it more clear.  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ah, I knew what you were talking about. Amazing isn't it? I mean that I knew about Racing! My son is a racing nut, he loves to watch them!!! On your seat the edge anyway, careful not to fall off  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Nevermind I get it now. Duh! Man do I feel stupid....lol Jeffrey |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Rebecca: Thanks for reading, I hope your son does not go as crazy as me when watching, I am especially crazy at the end if Dale is anywhere close I pace and pace worrying and hoping he'll make it. Jeff: Don't worry I did not figure many would relate but had to write it anyway cause it was on my mind. Thanks for reading it again. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enjoy watching the race! Don't fall off your seat! Denise |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Ah, a kindred soul...I too am a Dale E. fan, Dreamer. All I can say to you is....Go E ! Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yu hi was just at the texas motorspeedway yuh watchin a relative in the drag races yuh all the wierd concoctions it was something to see..your poem is true to life i found that suprising it wasn't dull at all (the races not yur poem you ninny )All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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