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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Together here Nothing to fear Shed no tears I'll hold you dear Hearts aflame Always the same Playing no games I know your name Passions desire Fueling the fire Climbing the spires I'm not a liar Love always Fills the days Shining like rays I know many ways Always together Leave you never In any weather Our bond won't sever Together Hearts Passions Love Always. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Well put Sven, you are truly a romantic at heart. I love this piece Jeffrey |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I really like the style you use here Sven. The flow is as lovely as words themselves. Another beauty! I must find out your secret! Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I needed to hear something like this right now Sven...you've written some beautiful words here...keep em coming, will ya?  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sheer Romantic Poetry, Sven. Thanks for sharing - I enjoyed it. Teresa King |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Simply beautiful, Sven. Just gorgeous. I love the way your words promise. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Change it somewhat, and it's the same for true friends Sven A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, This is simple, yet beautiful. Excellent!! I love it. You are writing with such feeling....wonderful words. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is beautiful, as always, Sven...heartfelt and intriguing with promise. I love your work!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Such sweet romantic words that flow from your heart through to your pen. Great poem. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Jeffrey, yes I am. . . a born romantic. . . Marina, secret? Yes, yes. . . ancient Sumerian secret!! Devina, you're welcome. . . and yes, there are more where that came from. . . netswan, glad that you liked it.. . Skittles, thank you. . . I try to show that.. . Isis, yes, it could be true for friends too. . . LW, thank you. . . and yes, I am writing with feeling. . . serenity, thank you too. . . and I love your work as well!! tracie, thank you. . . my pen continues to pour out words. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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